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Author Topic: My first ever sim story - The Diary of Laura Smith - Chapter 20 - part 2!  (Read 46944 times)
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« Reply #30 on: October 28, 2008, 07:13:13 am »

Yay he's alive! I'm happy!
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« Reply #31 on: October 28, 2008, 10:27:34 am »

i hope Kyle and Laura would be together:)
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« Reply #32 on: October 28, 2008, 12:17:04 pm »

GTsims - i'm really sorry it makes you sad, but i wanted to make a story that was based on real life. These things happen everyday and it is sad.

arielle - Yeah Kyle is a real sweetie!

Starwish - Kyle and Laura are best friends, who knows what will happen.
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« Reply #33 on: October 28, 2008, 05:03:13 pm »

I love this story its so sad but some parts just make me wanna kill someone becuae that so harsh and some parts make me really happy =)
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« Reply #34 on: October 28, 2008, 06:49:35 pm »

Yay! I'm happy! When will you have the next one?
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« Reply #35 on: October 28, 2008, 07:28:30 pm »

when will u get the next one in i get so exicited if there is another one posted thats new
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« Reply #36 on: October 28, 2008, 09:18:41 pm »

Hey if you want that anoying green diamond thing to go way type

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« Reply #37 on: October 29, 2008, 10:45:59 am »

Yeah thanks for that Arielle.

Dont worry Madi the next post will hopefully be up tonight. I may even make a start now :-)
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« Reply #38 on: October 29, 2008, 11:14:20 am »

(As with the other two parts, this part will be written like a story not a diary)

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The next morning Laura woke early, she even managed to make herself fairly presentable, she couldn't wait to see Kyle and Caleb again. Just as visiting time was starting a nurse came in and said to Laura that Kyle couldn't make it today, his father was very ill and Caleb had a cold but they would come another day. The nurse went out of the room and Laura started to cry, she was so disappointed she just needed to talk to someone. Just then there was a knock at the door and in came....

"Tony, what are you doing here?"

"Oh Laura i'm so sorry"

Tony just sat there with his head down not saying another word.



Laura hated asking Tony for help but she didnt want to lay in bed all day.
"Tony can you help me get into the wheelchair please"
"Yeah sure, course i can, yeah"

Laura and Tony sat looking at each other for what, to laura, felt like a decade.



"Tony you nearly killed me"
"Yeah i know im sorry about that"
"You nearly killed our son"
"I didnt mean to"

Laura exploded, it felt like a volcano had erupted inside of her, she couldn't hold back anymore.

"SORRY, your sorry! You nearly killed me and our baby Tony. You left me for dead! You locked me in the room and left me there all battered and broken. Do you have any idea what you have done? How you have made me feel? Because of you I have 3 broken ribs, 2 cracked ribs, a broken nose, 2 broken fingers, a fractured cheekbone, a split lip and black eyes and all you can say is SORRY! You disgust me Tony! I wish I had never met you, I'm glad your mum left, no wonder she left, with you and your dad!"


With that Tony fled the room. Suddenly Laura felt sick. All she could think was "oh god what have i done" She loved Tony and she had upset him by saying the meanest thing possible. She knew how much Tony missed his mum. She was as bad as Tony now. For some reason Laura just hoped Tony would forgive her...

Laura managed to wheel herself outside and there Tony was he was just stood there sobbing with his head in his hands. He no longer looked like a powerful man just a scared, vulnerable little boy.
It took all Lauras strength to pull herself out of the wheelchair, she stood there looking at Tony in shock.



"Tony, Tony"
"What?"
"I'm sorry Tony, I didnt mean to upset you"
"I miss my mum so much Laura"
"I know and I shouldnt have said that Tony, your mum loved you so much"
"I miss her so much"
"Its okay Tony, you have me, Caleb and Dylan, we are your family"
"Forgive me?"
"Yeah I love you dont I"



Laura had given Tony another chance.... How many more would she give him? Would she survive another beating?
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« Reply #39 on: October 29, 2008, 11:16:42 am »

awww laura is stupid by forgiving tony again!!! i hate tony sooo much!
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« Reply #40 on: October 29, 2008, 11:37:03 am »

When you're in love there are no bounds but sometimes you should listen to your brain and not your heart; but it's difficult...but I also think that Laura is crazy, like she has no limits...maybe Tony will change? But I doubt it...
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« Reply #41 on: October 29, 2008, 12:04:14 pm »

I think every bad person has the ability to change, but maybe, for some, its sometimes too late....
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« Reply #42 on: October 29, 2008, 04:27:16 pm »

when are u gonna post the next one
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« Reply #43 on: October 29, 2008, 04:31:09 pm »

ughh

I hate Tony

he deserves to cry
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« Reply #44 on: October 29, 2008, 05:35:56 pm »

I hate Tony too. He definetely deserves to cry.

I would come out and laugh, because no insult in the world would match what he did to her.
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